I’m 13 and i love to write!! I’m starting this one boko and I’m taking it piece by piece. So far I have a draft of 50 pages but I need to get readers hooked in the beginning. Tell me what you think! A cold figure came out among the shadows, and stepped toward me. [...]
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What do you think of this short chapter I wrote for my book?
August 7th, 2010 
Nothing could have prepared me for the sight of her. She was a horror beyond horror, a nightmare exceeding nightmares. Her hair was the first thing I noticed. A long, black mess the wind blew it wildly around her ruined face. But then I noticed that there was no wind- in fact, the air itself [...]
what do you think of these lyrics so far?
July 30th, 2010 the last cigarette got them caffeine shakes and my skins all ghostly pale got nicotine stained teeth and finger nails got a belly full of whisky and voices in my head a pocket full of single dollar bills i know i could be all that i can be i know that i could turn my [...]
Think I’d Better Leave
July 5th, 2010 And in the beginning the high trousered one said “Let there be spotlights,” and behold there were spotlights and lots of wailing, brown nosing and gnashing of bright teeth. Before there was X Factor, there was Pop Idol and before there was Pop Idol there was a time when music was less regurgitated and formulaic. [...]
What do you think of this poem I wrote?
July 2nd, 2010 " Blood mobiel" zere udders, head pain intense, look entirely swollen, unibrow. .jeukende skin, serious acne, cannot stand rechtop, distant, stink. .liefdevolle no longer, it angry what emphasises more, violent, obsessive. .boos, call its, its call, no answer, them hunger, but its flatulence is empty. .voedsel cannot be taken, IBS for days, watering eyes, Midol [...]
Ladies, what do you think about a guy that has really bright white teeth ?
June 26th, 2010 from using Crest Whitestrips ?
What do you think of Anesthesia-free teeth cleaning for dogs and cats?
June 20th, 2010 This is a service offered in California, Washington and Texas. It is controversial, but in light of the general things, why would this not as a service offered to those pets too weak “to go under anesthesia” or just a simple routine teeth cleaning?
Do u think drinkn coffee thru a straw instead of sippn from the cup reduces severness of it staining ur teeth?
June 20th, 2010 saw someone say this on tv last night and would like opinions
What Dentists Think About Free Teeth Whitening Samples
June 7th, 2010 Free Teeth Whitening Dentists Review Samples Imagine if your perfect smile glittering celebrity crying out for attention wherever you go. Naturally you want to know how shiny that perfect smile for free to get? With the eerste 3 seconds of vergadering of someone you will be judged, so it is vital to a good first [...]