what do you think of these lyrics so far?

the last cigarette

got them caffeine shakes
and my skins all ghostly pale
got nicotine stained teeth
and finger nails
got a belly full of whisky
and voices in my head
a pocket full of
single dollar bills

i know i could be
all that i can be
i know that i could
turn my life around
but ill piss my life away
drinking in the rain
better to be
six feet underground

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2 Responses to “what do you think of these lyrics so far?”

  1. Aubry M says:

    that’s deep, very good lyrics (:

  2. oh no, you're not creepy. says:

    woww thats really good. and believe me… i’m a really harsh critic, and a lyricist. its different, yet people can relate. it also gets what you’re feeling across without being whiney…
    dude. in short, this is amazing.

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